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residue of swallowed sun
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residue of swallowed sun |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we spoke often of the waterfalls and how you enjoyed them more since you knew your purse was full of those treats I always wanted and we would spend hours there like the puppies with admiring eyes wishing they knew what to do when green mossy mounds beckoned them you giggled when the ranger left early and we could play with your jack and jill up and down those subtle mountains spilling buckets of their whiskey residue while the voyeur freeways were distant yet just outside the windows of our forest pressing their ears to your sighways as you pressed your veils to my eyes and made me covet the shuddering of your rivers _____________ daark |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Love the x-rated poetry that cannot be banned. ~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die. ~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
jp...written while watching the disney channel..true story number 307, thanks guy |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
while the voyeur freeways were distant yet just outside the windows of our forest pressing their ears to your sighways as you pressed your veils to my eyes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love that view, and I like you under my skin too. yankity yank yank!  Big bear hugs, cool dude~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Got me on this one DS as I read your reply to Jerry. The last line is wonderful wordsmithing but I'm lost for words for a change so I guess that must mean the world's coming to an end! You're a special writer my friend. Eric Forget the Psychiatrists they just find out all about you and sell you back to yourself! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
...after the smiles and short giggles (and increasing my favorites choice from 1 line up to 3), I can only say...this was great "just outside the windows of our forest pressing their ears to your sighways as you pressed your veils to my eyes" ...and loved your story, too  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Senses, soundly sweet-talked, subtly smoothed over until ruffled substantially, are akin to electrical current underplays...and you, Sir, surely surrender the proper sounds, sincerely, even if a bit sunfully. Yep...good stuff. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue, you smile me wide babe, thank you _______________ et, thanks for the reviews and the grins amigo _______________ steavenr, thanks for the reads and comments my friend ____________________ ms sun, you are always a poem with your glances, thanks lady |
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serenity Junior Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 13Queensland, Australia. |
This piece is truly beautiful. Thank you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms serenity, thanks ms..and welcome to the bluezoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks james |
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