Open Poetry #47 |
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These Were The Good Days |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America ![]() |
recollections of hot summer days smell of newly mowed grass gentle southern wind streaming from the gulf skinny-dipping in polluted ponds best times of our lives sky so intensely blue it hurt your eyes with small puffs of white clouds here and there we stole moments together hidden from eyes that pry lips that talk tongues that wag we weren't supposed to be together we knew it couldn't last but after all this time when your thoughts turn toward those days as mine have tonight then it did last it most certainly did last ~ What's The Difference Between Roast Beef And Pea Soup? / Anyone Can Roast Beef. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I know just what you mean. Yep, exactly. Lori |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Yep, and good morning, Lori. I guess most people have memories embedded within them from long ago. ~ What's The Difference Between Roast Beef And Pea Soup? / Anyone Can Roast Beef. ~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have been in a different life for long enough to not be able to remember what I know to be the good old days love reading you |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Good morning passing shadows, and thank you for stopping and reading my effort. I'm sorry you have lost the memory of those days. Then again, sometimes the good old days weren't all that good after all. In my case, and how this poem manifested itself, I have pleasant memories from time to time. ~ What's The Difference Between Roast Beef And Pea Soup? / Anyone Can Roast Beef. ~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Oh I got memories, just feel guilty thinking about them now since I am married LOL |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
remembering the good times can be sweet for sure...sometimes, i really wish romance was still like that before computer and texting, etc... There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Haha!! Well, passing shadows, memories are something no one can take away from us. They are private and no one should feel in any way guilty about them, married or not. We all have them. They are us. <><> Romance is still around, Faith, but you have to spread yourself out, go places. I had a seven-year wonderful relationship with a woman I met in a supermarket. I saw her. Bumped into her cart with mine accidentally on purpose and went from there. You have to make things happen, my friend. ~ What's The Difference Between Roast Beef And Pea Soup? / Anyone Can Roast Beef. ~ |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
It most certainly does last eh? Enjoyed. "accidentally on purpose" lol that sounds like a sweet beginning. Always a pleasure. -Trina |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Hi Trina, and thank you. I always look for you. You are one of the Blue Room's good'n's. ~ What's The Difference Between Roast Beef And Pea Soup? / Anyone Can Roast Beef. ~ |
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