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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-01-29 11:45 AM

I'm not a Goddess
carved in stone
or of sculpted clay
My curves
have seen
firmer days
Yet the fire
that my Goddess
burns hotter
with the years
Were I a maid
of innocence
would be more
than I could
control
As it is
My Goddess
soft
with age
knows plenty
more of
passioned heat
then it did
when I was
twenty

1/30/11

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2011-01-29 12:34 PM

This warms right up into a sensuous delivery.
Goddesses at both ages I'd say.

First you get good then you get better....smile...

Love the whole idea Lori and write on to fulfillment. Good stuff once again!

Eric

the assured expectation of things hoped for, the evident demonstration of reality though not beheld

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-01-29 12:40 PM

Very cool poem...i like it a lot!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

3 posted 2011-01-29 12:51 PM

Hah! I hear you, Lori, and I definitely have to side with Eric on this one about the getting better part especially. Gotta love it.

~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2011-01-29 07:15 PM

Thanks Eric, you are way too kind.
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Faith, glad you liked it!
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Thanks Jerry for the complment
Lori

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (01-30-2011 07:48 AM).]

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2011-01-29 08:20 PM

"My curves
have seen
firmer days"

...what a cool self-descriptive phrase...excellent write

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2011-01-29 08:50 PM

Young goddesses can crack the clay;
the elder goddesses...can form new stone.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-01-30 01:27 PM

Thanks Steaven I felt the term "fluffy" had become cliche'

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Well...okay, if you say so

Sunshine!

Lori

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