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Open Poetry #47

evil

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-01-28 12:05 PM

there is evil in the powder room
there is evil lurking in the halls
there's evil everywhere you look
it even penetrates the walls

it cares not who it helps or hurts
it's running rampant in this place
there's so much damage being done
it's such a horrible disgrace

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-01-28 06:14 AM

Ah, Good morning, Faith. The first poem I've read today is a good'n. This could be taken a number of ways, a domestic situation, political, or just evil in general. In any case you are correct, evil has gained an irrefutable hold on the world. You don't believe that, watch the news (which I don't, gave up television) or pick up a newspaper.

~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-01-28 08:16 AM

Funny thing about evil is that it can take an innocent situation and contaminate it into something ugly and hurtful. It never ceases to amaze me the evil man is capable of.
Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-01-28 12:56 PM

i actually wrote this about an office i worked in years ago...you could actually feel the evil in the air...it was awful...

thank you both for your wonderful remarks

faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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