Open Poetry #47 |
I Have No Friends, and Want None |
Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
I have no friends, and need none- Is what I one time said. I've since then acquired several, Now all of them are dead. For years I was a loner In life I walked alone In every situation- I faced it own on my own. But then as I grew older- I found to my surprise I found an inner longing To know the other guys. The men whom I had worked with Through several troubled years I grew to know their families Frustrations, and their fears. I learned to know their weakness Their strength and character I'd sometimes tell them my dreams And then they'd tell me theirs. But, oh, the painful wakening Which stabbed me to the heart When friends of mine passed over Forever we did part. And no one knows the heartache Which oft I felt inside Nor tears which I have hidden In my room, when I have cried; Reverting to past wisdom It's really like I said, "I have no friends, and want none". The ones I loved are dead. |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
This is very beautifully written. I could feel the sadness as I read this. You may feel like this now but you always make new friends through the years. When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Love this piece..as always your words hold much truth. Keep in mind we are here and we ain't all dead yet Lori |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
John, you are like a good wine – you have mellowed with age. Your poem is beautiful, but I know you are not fooled any more by the second-last line. Smiles. Owl |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
a profound and wise poem...expertly penned There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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