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Open Poetry #47

Done Whining

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

0 posted 2012-01-18 05:51 PM

I wanted to print the layers of these days,
let the india seep throughout, stain
the pristine fibers to a rorschach
of distraction. Sorrow sleeps,

though- instead I mold a new
creation: toss the linen, grasp
this malleable, silk clay
in patient palms-

and shape the sun.

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2012-01-18 06:04 PM

Oh...very interesting spill...enjoyed the swift journey thru the pathos of emotion...

Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

2 posted 2012-01-18 06:05 PM

Thank you, Bel1e

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-01-18 06:39 PM

Absolutely! Shaping the sun is the only way to fly. Good for you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2012-01-18 08:03 PM

Very cool, my friend .

j.

Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

5 posted 2012-01-18 08:06 PM

Thanks much, JerryPat, Jwesley

Amaryllis

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2012-01-18 11:07 PM

I really enjoy your poetry.

A

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2012-01-19 10:01 AM

Pure delight, dear Amaryllis, and so uplifting. Beautiful and wise.

... and more so ... true poesy!

Margherita

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2012-01-19 01:17 PM

Amazingly delightful poetry!
Enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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