Open Poetry #47 |
lipstick & soup reflections |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
that passing by in my minds hallway and you were scattered in dreams pretending your fingers were blinds and you peeked between them quietly you left your finger paints out again and I drew pictures of hearts and flowers but you smeared them together like soup and then made lip prints in the middle you kissed the mirrors over your secrets then just stood there with nothing on but nothing showing either on purpose so I would have to get in between you and your reflections, to finally wear you ___________ daark |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Well, hello lovely...A girl could wake up to this kind of poetry, for sure. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
man, how I love fingerpaint. This is...just lovely~
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Nicole..thank you for peeking in ms ____________ BBBel1e, thank you daughter...for smearing the walls with happy faces. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and you were scattered in dreams pretending your fingers were blinds and you peeked between them quietly Soup just became the number one choice for any meal. LOL Loved this! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern...you always smile me with your reply. Thanks lady |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
you kissed the mirrors over your secrets then just stood there with nothing on Funny, I just commented an article of DailyOM about "being naked" and here you are with your own rendering of a moment of nakedness and how wonderfully poetic it is... Mirrors witness truth and a kiss like this seals the beauty of secrets . Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Mar...thank you lady for the special eyes |
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