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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-01-16 08:25 AM

Corny, but truthful.

Your lips are honey-dewed,
Your smile is such delight.
I love you through and through,
And for you I would fight.

I'm lost in your unique,
Your heart and mine are one.
When we touch, cheek to cheek,
You're the bright shining sun.

I think of you each day,
I dream of you each night.
And when we get to play,
The world just seems alright.

You hold my heart, my dear,
Please never let it go,
Your smile was cupid's spear,
One look I was aglow.

©January 14, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2012-01-16 08:58 AM

You are on a roll, dear Jerry! I think she will blush with pleasure when you will read this poem to her. It's pure joy and grace.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-01-16 09:14 AM

I hope so, Margherita. Thank you so much.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

3 posted 2012-01-16 12:19 PM

I am of the mind that when love is expressed freely, then it is never corny. It doesn't matter what anyone else thinks.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-01-16 12:21 PM

I know you are correct, Nicole. I so appreciate that you find my poetry so agreeable and stop to read and comment. Thank you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2012-01-16 02:18 PM

Not corny at all, Jerry.
It's from your heart, mind, and soul.
It's a beauty!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-01-16 02:21 PM

Aw, thank you, JL. Yep, it was from my heart for sure . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2012-01-16 06:37 PM

I think it is beautiful too Jerry

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-01-16 06:39 PM

Thanks , Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2012-01-16 07:25 PM

JP, this is charming,
so alarming
that it could be a card
and Hallmark is it's name...

Truly, I enjoyed the smile!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2012-01-16 07:45 PM

Thank you Sunshine for getting a smile from my poem. A smile is better by far than a frown, I've been told. Ah, Hallmark I am not. (Psst! I'm glad of that.)

Thank you for being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

11 posted 2012-01-16 10:55 PM

Always enjoy the truth in your poems JP.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

12 posted 2012-01-17 06:10 AM

Thanks, Ms. E. I always enjoy seeing your name here, much appreciated.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

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