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Kaleidoscope Wish
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Kaleidoscope Wish |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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if I could make a wish a kaleidoscope wish multi-faceted in its possibility to awake each morning to your cotton-candy breath to your warm mouth cozy against the hollow of my neck feeling your fingers on my chest listening to your heartbeat beating out a drumbeat with mine if this were possible if this miracle could happen I would be the luckiest happiest man in the world understanding I would be unable to find that same feeling from anyone but you ©January 11, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You do romantic so well Jerry, this is wonderful! Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Lori. When it is heartfelt romantic comes easy. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is delightful, dear Jerry! May this colorful dream manifest. Meanwhile you continue to be beautifully inspired. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You are so right, Margherita, I am being inspired in ways I never thought I would be. Appreciate you insightful comments. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I agree with all the above. Your muse is rolling 7's. Great write, Jerry.  JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Seven's work for me, JL, and thanks for rolling them for me. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
This poem is like a room full of prisms... I love the colors, Jerry. You make them dance. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You are so sweet, Nicole, thank you so much. Our wishes, which is merely or desires, we try to make both of them come true. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
This poem blooms with lightness and beauty |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you a lot, EmmaRose. I appreciate your very nice comments. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When it's right, it's so very right.... hoping you get your miracle! |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed watching you make your wish, JP Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ain't dat da truff, suthern? Thank you very much for stopping by and commenting. <><> Thanks, Ms E, for the obversation and comment. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
reading between the lines is always fun~~ lovely writing, Jerry M |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Ain't dat da truff, nakdthoughts? I appreciate that you come here often to read between the lines, Thank you! ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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