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Open Poetry #47
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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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0 posted 2012-01-11 03:01 AM


They held their hands together
her thumb inside his palm
With the roof they use to sit on
as young children
lending its stage
to the city before them

His tender hand on her right cheek
where the face of his hand
combed over her skin
as his naval touched the crevasse of her lips

Their hands cusped together
under the cerebral stare of the stars
that patched the skies black canvass

As they sat with their backs
to the endless fields
they were lost in the silence of each others arms
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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
1 posted 2012-01-11 03:52 AM

ghee you are really taking me back with this, the memories of my youth - loved the imagery & the warmth of young love this portrayed for me - well done!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing
Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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2 posted 2012-01-11 06:56 AM

Thanks, Tracie.  Happy I could take you back...hopefully plenty of more good years to come.

Cheers
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