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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2012-01-06 07:20 AM



There is a cabin along the edge of Passion Hollow...deep in the evergreen blanket of sighs and damp dreams....a stream is always running beside that cabin and when lovers stumble from the friendly wood porch into the shade of afternoon...they can be seen sipping from that stream like it was the life source of love...sometimes you go there alone just to wear the residue of rapture...you look into the stream and whisper then:

you come to the garden of finger bend places
wearing only your wanting and high heels
without perfume, with just the dew of you

so I would know only the scent of your love
and would taste only the liquor of your lust
and there would never be anyone else around

you say my eyes are in that shiver water well
that you see me when you bathe in the warm
and you smear my glances over your charms

pushing them into places that make music
making them stay other places for longer
while you show them all of your kneading

before you breast them closed with sigh songs

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daark

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2012-01-06 10:19 AM


Can't resist commenting on this one D...
It speaks to me.


Lori

bel1e
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2 posted 2012-01-06 12:03 PM


garden of Eden poetry, darkness!  love it !

             

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2012-01-06 12:29 PM


Ms Lori, thanks lady

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BBBel1e, thank you knotty daughter

Nicole
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4 posted 2012-01-06 10:21 PM


Mercy... lol  I love the picture you've painted; there's just something about a cabin in the woods.
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5 posted 2012-01-07 01:20 AM


Ah, you make me smile.  I think I have been to this cabin and have drunk from this stream.

Ali-san

Margherita
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6 posted 2012-01-07 06:09 AM


quote:
without perfume, with just the dew of you

so I would know only the scent of your love



That's very lovely!

Margherita

tracie66
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7 posted 2012-01-07 06:13 AM


what a delightful read, most enjoyable indeed.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
8 posted 2012-01-07 06:25 AM


Ms Nicole...thank you ms,,,one of those dream places

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Ms Mar, thank you lady friend


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Ms Ali-san, thank you for the eyes and lips (stream)

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Ms Tracie, thank you for the read and comment

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2012-01-11 04:46 PM


Fine romantic writing...James
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