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sigh stream of passion hollow
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sigh stream of passion hollow |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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There is a cabin along the edge of Passion Hollow...deep in the evergreen blanket of sighs and damp dreams....a stream is always running beside that cabin and when lovers stumble from the friendly wood porch into the shade of afternoon...they can be seen sipping from that stream like it was the life source of love...sometimes you go there alone just to wear the residue of rapture...you look into the stream and whisper then: you come to the garden of finger bend places wearing only your wanting and high heels without perfume, with just the dew of you so I would know only the scent of your love and would taste only the liquor of your lust and there would never be anyone else around you say my eyes are in that shiver water well that you see me when you bathe in the warm and you smear my glances over your charms pushing them into places that make music making them stay other places for longer while you show them all of your kneading before you breast them closed with sigh songs _____________ daark |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Can't resist commenting on this one D... It speaks to me.  Lori |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
garden of Eden poetry, darkness! love it ! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Lori, thanks lady ______ BBBel1e, thank you knotty daughter |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Mercy... lol I love the picture you've painted; there's just something about a cabin in the woods. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ah, you make me smile. I think I have been to this cabin and have drunk from this stream. Ali-san |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: That's very lovely! Margherita |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
what a delightful read, most enjoyable indeed. Love is the life of the soul... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Nicole...thank you ms,,,one of those dream places ______________ Ms Mar, thank you lady friend _______________ Ms Ali-san, thank you for the eyes and lips (stream) _____________ Ms Tracie, thank you for the read and comment |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine romantic writing...James |
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