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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

0 posted 2012-01-07 06:46 AM

we
me, you
following our
hearts meeting in
the middle joining our
bodies as we sway
in unadulterated
love swells
you, me
we

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-01-07 07:06 AM

Ah, this is sweet, magical and all around fantastic. The swelling of love is pointed out in the structure of your poem and the words speak loud and clear. Nice work, tracie66.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2012-01-07 07:14 AM

Very nice in form and emotional sharing, dear Tracie Maree!

Margherita

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

3 posted 2012-01-07 04:15 PM

Joyous! Comes together like a kiss! ~K

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

4 posted 2012-01-07 10:44 PM

Nicely done, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2012-01-07 10:58 PM

very fine!

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

6 posted 2012-01-07 10:59 PM

Enjoyed your poem Tracy,
Ms.E

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

7 posted 2012-01-08 03:24 AM

thanks to all of you for taking the time to read & comment on my poem, I really appreciate it very much.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2012-01-09 01:49 AM

Nice...James

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

9 posted 2012-01-09 05:01 AM

thanks James

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2012-01-09 02:37 PM

A diamond of a write. Superb jewel.
Enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

11 posted 2012-01-10 04:54 AM

...lol glad you enjoyed.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2012-01-10 06:30 AM

ms T...a pleasure to watch this swell into the poem it became

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

13 posted 2012-01-11 03:40 AM

thanks DS ~

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