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Open Poetry #47

Twilight Love Song

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2012-01-07 03:08 PM

          Twilight Love Song

Here in the unfolding twilight,
where no clocks are counting,
on this breathless edge of
  whispering wilderness
by the fairest weather of the heart
and perfect harmony of two souls,
neither for boundless fame,
infinite fortune, nor mastery of
  the universe …
would I trade one finest moment
  of unconditional love.

              --- b. e. adams (1/7/2012)

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (01-08-2012 11:43 AM).]

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

1 posted 2012-01-07 04:21 PM

When soul is one, moments are forever. Still I want to collect them like sparkles skimming a sunlit stream...

Elusive they seem, but they sustain!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-01-07 04:56 PM

Very well stated and composed, poet, and the message and content is clear as a steeple bell.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-01-07 11:02 PM

Enjoyed your description of true love. Whomever was loved by you was surely blessed.
Ms. E

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2012-01-08 03:39 AM

this is absolutely delightful - thanks for sharing.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2012-01-08 05:37 AM

Your romantic poetry is some of the best I have ever read, Bruce, on PIP or anywhere else.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2012-01-08 05:06 PM

A sublime moment you evoke ... polished into a gem of a poem!

Margherita

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