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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-01-02 11:33 AM

the night is silent
happiness profound
I can hear an echo
sound of pure bliss
love has found me
my demons are gone
replaced with you
sweet as sugar cane
with a spice rack full
of colorful cutting wit
I've waited a lifetime
for you to come to me
and so you have come
the night is still silent
in honor of you and I

©December 28, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2012-01-02 11:37 AM

WOW! Very impressive write Jerry.
This sticks to the ribs
like oatmeal on a cold day.

Really nice!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-01-02 11:43 AM

I had hot oatmeal, blueberries and honey this morning. I start my day out with oatmeal, JL. Thanks for your very nice comments.

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Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

3 posted 2012-01-02 01:30 PM

I've always wanted to like oatmeal, but no matter how much I try...bah. I will take this over oatmeal ANYDAY.

Very sweetly serene thoughts.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-01-02 01:58 PM

Bah! Humbug! Non-oatmeal-type-person . . .

Well, since you were so sweet to me concerning my little poem, I forgive you.
Thanks, Nicole

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bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

5 posted 2012-01-02 03:03 PM

Lovely stuff dear poet

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-01-02 03:18 PM

Thank you, bel1e.

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Word Weaver
Member

since 2011-03-06

Posts 437
California, USA

7 posted 2012-01-02 03:39 PM

One of your best Jerry.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-01-02 04:08 PM

Thank you very much, Marcia.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2012-01-03 08:45 AM

Beatutiful Jerry!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2012-01-03 09:48 AM

I just love it when you talk like that, Lori . . .

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