Open Poetry #47 |
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Storm |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana ![]() |
a storm came up over the city . . . a BRIGHT flash a LOUD crash it echoes . . . oes . . . oes . . . oes on down the street grumblegrumblegrumble and rumbles back into the heavens ©December 28, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
Love your thunderbolts, Mr. Pat! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Thanks, Baby Girl . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very Cute! My friend!! Still laughing. j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks j., for taking on my insanity today. It is much appreciated. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
If this is insanity we should all strive to be nutty. Enjoyed your observation of the "Storm" which came a'calling... JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hi, JL, thanks for the nice-nice, it is appreciated . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Whether metaphorical or not, I love thunderstorms. Especially in the south...nothing quite like them. No break in the thunder, just the constant rolling drums. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You're correct about the drums, Nicole. Thanks for stopping by . . . Always good to see you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Love it when you try something new... Lori ![]() |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Lori. I appreciate you kindness. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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