Open Poetry #47 |
For You |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
FOR YOU 31 December 2011 A prayer has just birthed in the shelter of my heart, like a tiny flowerbud in humble self-confidence opening its sepals and giggling its petals into my forest garden in joy; like a wavelet tickling the shore in foam-edged, sea-foal delight; like the sun mischievously peeking through grey-day clouds and hide-and-seek light on prancing, translucent leaves; like mountain-tops blue in sky-dream distance; like the lovelight glowing in the eyes of my adored fur-babies; and the prayer, the prayer oh, the prayer it is for all whom pain of any hue is touching or ever did or some time will, for pain, if explored and caressed and understood, unites and teaches and, yes, comforts, and births art of quiver-cry beauty, may you find the warmth you seek whether for a butterfly-wing flutter moment or a lily-day or a redwood lifetime, and may you seize it, embrace it, celebrate it, dance it, immortalise it, honour it in gratitude and bliss; but the prayer is so very very much more for those whom pain has not reached, or has - but without your exploration, your caress, your understanding, without having united you with the fellow-members of the human race or nature or God, without having taught you lessons you love, without having brought you the comfort of exhausted tears, without having birthed a beauteous poem or story or painting or sculpture or thought, for the dead-ache sadness in that stops my breath, may your hearts open and melt to tsunami tears of sharp cold stone pain and dragonfly happiness as wild and gentle as a gazelle, and eagle freedom as bright as sunlight on silent snow, as warm as summer palm-beaches, as consoling as pan-flute solos, leading you down the pathway, dewdrop-rich in minuscule, eye-wide discoveries to the wonder and the blessing and the solace and the glory forever and ever of uninhibited feeling. Amen. Owl |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
You see, how effortlessly you weave whimsy into prayer...THIS is poetry.
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Wow! Oh, wow! Coming from such a master wordsmith! Thank you, Belle. Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Deeply moving, Owl. It is satisfying and even threateningly sad in spots, but the overwhelming wonder of the poem is its complete and utter honesty. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Although I love how this poem expands, and expands without becoming oversaid..ending perfectly where it should...this stanza is the chorus of the song...love it! "like a tiny flowerbud in humble self-confidence opening its sepals and giggling its petals into my forest garden in joy;" |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
As only you can say it.Thank you.jo |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
wonderful imagery, fine writing indeed ... and, all the best wishes for the 'new year' ! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Jerry, for your beautiful reply and for hugging Zoe for me. Thank you, Ford. Smiling at your Namaste-Nature response. Love everything you said and that you saw it and thought it. Thank you, Jo. I am honoured at what you said. Thank you, Bruce. Glad you liked it. Happy New Year to you too and to all Pipsters. Owl |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh dear Lady Owl, this is so heartfelt and written with great care and tender emotion. Lovely writing, truly!!! Happy New Year to you good poetess~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Blues. I am so glad you found my poem's heart. Smiles. Happy New Year to you and all Pipsters and their loved ones. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: A sigh escapes from the core of me and it holds the sound of AMEN AMEN AMEN! You really take my breath away with this precious, incredibly beautifully crafted gift of love, dear Owl. Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Margherita, for your lovely reply and for your 3 Amens. Smiles. Owl |
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