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Oneness |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Oneness I see spirits swaying in moonbeams, gyrating in frenzied "see me, see me", I see all the souls that want to be seen, I feel the life of us coming together. . . I see you, I see you, encloses my heart with the warmth, of Oneness. © wesley james beard, jr. january 1, 2012 |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Perfection, my friend. xoxoxo Alison |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oneness is the attainable goal, but often falls far short in its desire to blend. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"encloses my heart with the warmth, of Oneness." Now that is special!! Excellent write my friend. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I see you I see you I love the repetition; it draws like a magnet. This is beautiful. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
niiiice~*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely poem, especially that last line, Jimmy. ida |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
just gorgeous! Love is the life of the soul... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Alison ... Just knowing you liked it is perfection enough for me ... Thanks, dear friend. j. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Jerry, my coon-ass buddy, and true oneness just isn't the same without the power of two behind it... My son-in-law went to Boothville, last week and he said from Metairie, south, people thought he was crazy because he was grinning and waving at everyone thinking ... maybe it was you. I told hime I have nothing against profiling --- he could have eliminated women, children, certain obvious differences and small animals...so if you saw some madly waving weirdo ... just write it off as another of those fume-sniffing rig workers.... j. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nicole ... having you enjoy it is extra specically, my friend, as I love the way you write/think.... j. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
JL --- always happy to see you looking in , my friend. j. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
bel1e .... never knew a single word could give me goose bumps.... thanks for the lesson. j. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Marchmadness -- love knowing you've been in my meager writings, my friend...special to me. j. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
and tracie66...I too think of Marge a lot. She was such a burst of life! Thank you so much for reading what little I offer and sharing the "longing" I feel for someone gone. j. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
What a beautiful images of two souls coming together... I loved it. Nicely done. Michael |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
you're welcome J - this is truly a beautiful & tender render, a perfect write for longing of loved once passed and I thank you for sharing it.  Love is the life of the soul... |
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