Open Poetry #47 |
for the things I cannot change, I will not dwell |
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
for the things I cannot change I will not dwell for to dwell is to reside and some things are not worth the weight on my mind I shall live in the moment allowing myself to go with the flow of everyday living allowing myself to have a life not just "exist" for to dwell is to be weighed down in the depths of the world around me and I want to swim freely in this universe of life not drown in it's swell Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe — W. E. Channing |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh, tracie66, if I could have come to terms with the words within this well-crafted poem of yours much earlier in my life, I probably wouldn't have spent Christmas alone this year. Still, it matter not, I guess when we learn things, as long as we do figure out what it's all about. (Alfie?) ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
45 years old and I'm still trying very hard to work it out, i think it all starts with forgiveness. There are some things we cannot forget/change but there is always forgiveness in the heart. I forgave someone this year about a month before Christmas & spent the morning with that person along with my husband & daughter, it felt good that they all felt good (if that makes sense) ~hugs~ to you Love is the life of the soul... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is not only wonderfully well crafted, it holds great wisdom, dear Tracie Maree. So much truth here too. Something to take to heart. Margherita |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Margherita thank you for your lovely comment, it means so much to me. Love is the life of the soul... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and some things are not worth the weight on my mind If I could only learn that! *S* Wise words, wonderfully written! *S* |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
What wise words. I think I'll carry them with me and into this new year. Thank you, Tracie. A |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Suthern & Allison, I thank you both for commenting, it means so much to me ~hugs~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"for the things I cannot change I will not dwell" Love this write! Very good advice too. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Be thankkful you have learned life's lesson at a relatively young age.Some never learn and some learn much too late. Happiness to you. jo |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
thanks JL & Jo I appreciate both your comments. Love is the life of the soul... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I find this piece quite inspirational, Tracie... like something I should have posted by my door and read everyday before I step out. The freedom you speak of is a wonderful thing... never let go of it. Michael |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ah hah...easy to say and not quite as easily done...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Michael - Your comment is most appreciated & I thank you for reading this. James - I couldn't agree more. Thanks for taking the time to read me. Love is the life of the soul... |
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