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tracie66
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0 posted 2011-12-26 08:12 PM


for the things I cannot change
I will not dwell
for to dwell is to reside
and some things are not worth
the weight on my mind
I shall live in the moment
allowing myself to go with the flow
of everyday living
allowing myself to have a life
not just "exist"
for to dwell
is to be weighed down in the depths
of the world around me
and I want to swim freely in this
universe of life
not drown in it's swell





Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-12-26 08:20 PM


Oh, tracie66, if I could have come to terms with the words within this well-crafted poem of yours much earlier in my life, I probably wouldn't have spent Christmas alone this year. Still, it matter not, I guess when we learn things, as long as we do figure out what it's all about. (Alfie?)

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

tracie66
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2 posted 2011-12-26 09:23 PM


45 years old and I'm still trying very hard to work it out, i think it all starts with forgiveness. There are some things we cannot forget/change but there is always forgiveness in the heart. I forgave someone this year about a month before Christmas & spent the morning with that person along with my husband & daughter, it felt good that they all felt good (if that makes sense)
~hugs~ to you

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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3 posted 2011-12-27 04:21 AM


This is not only wonderfully well crafted, it holds great wisdom, dear Tracie Maree.

So much truth here too. Something to take to heart.

Margherita

tracie66
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4 posted 2011-12-27 04:23 AM


Margherita thank you for your lovely comment, it means so much to me.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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5 posted 2011-12-27 10:06 AM


and some things are not worth
the weight on my mind

If I could only learn that! *S*

Wise words, wonderfully written! *S*

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6 posted 2011-12-28 02:43 AM


What wise words.  I think I'll carry them with me and into this new year.

Thank you, Tracie.

A

tracie66
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7 posted 2011-12-28 07:29 AM


Dear Suthern & Allison, I thank you both for commenting, it means so much to me

~hugs~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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8 posted 2011-12-28 12:21 PM


"for the things I cannot change
I will not dwell"

Love this write!  Very good advice too.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

latearrival
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9 posted 2011-12-28 01:57 PM


Be thankkful you have learned life's lesson at a relatively young age.Some never learn and some learn much too late. Happiness to you.

jo

tracie66
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10 posted 2012-01-02 04:18 AM


thanks JL & Jo I appreciate both your comments.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



Michael
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11 posted 2012-01-02 02:17 PM


I find this piece quite inspirational, Tracie... like something I should have posted by my door and read everyday before I step out.  The freedom you speak of is a wonderful thing... never let go of it.

Michael

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2012-01-02 10:14 PM


Ah hah...easy to say and not quite as easily done...James
tracie66
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13 posted 2012-01-03 07:29 AM


Michael - Your comment is most appreciated & I thank you for reading this.

James - I couldn't agree more. Thanks for taking the time to read me.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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