Open Poetry #47 |
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for the things I cannot change, I will not dwell |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia ![]() |
for the things I cannot change I will not dwell for to dwell is to reside and some things are not worth the weight on my mind I shall live in the moment allowing myself to go with the flow of everyday living allowing myself to have a life not just "exist" for to dwell is to be weighed down in the depths of the world around me and I want to swim freely in this universe of life not drown in it's swell Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe — W. E. Channing |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh, tracie66, if I could have come to terms with the words within this well-crafted poem of yours much earlier in my life, I probably wouldn't have spent Christmas alone this year. Still, it matter not, I guess when we learn things, as long as we do figure out what it's all about. (Alfie?) ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
45 years old and I'm still trying very hard to work it out, i think it all starts with forgiveness. There are some things we cannot forget/change but there is always forgiveness in the heart. I forgave someone this year about a month before Christmas & spent the morning with that person along with my husband & daughter, it felt good that they all felt good (if that makes sense) ~hugs~ to you Love is the life of the soul... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is not only wonderfully well crafted, it holds great wisdom, dear Tracie Maree. So much truth here too. Something to take to heart. Margherita ![]() |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Margherita thank you for your lovely comment, it means so much to me. Love is the life of the soul... |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and some things are not worth the weight on my mind If I could only learn that! *S* Wise words, wonderfully written! *S* |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
What wise words. I think I'll carry them with me and into this new year. Thank you, Tracie. A |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Suthern & Allison, I thank you both for commenting, it means so much to me ![]() ~hugs~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"for the things I cannot change I will not dwell" Love this write! Very good advice too. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Be thankkful you have learned life's lesson at a relatively young age.Some never learn and some learn much too late. Happiness to you. jo |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
thanks JL & Jo I appreciate both your comments. Love is the life of the soul... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I find this piece quite inspirational, Tracie... like something I should have posted by my door and read everyday before I step out. The freedom you speak of is a wonderful thing... never let go of it. Michael |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ah hah...easy to say and not quite as easily done...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Michael - Your comment is most appreciated & I thank you for reading this. James - I couldn't agree more. Thanks for taking the time to read me. Love is the life of the soul... |
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