Open Poetry #47 |
killing she softly |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you were like virgin shoes dancing innocent under the falling of eros arrows storming shot into the air by those voyeur men bows the sounds of their release was pleasing you said it was a musical seduction pulling your lady like apart, wounded, open and that after there was always empty inside with more entering almost too quickly til you were wearing only your agony again but you found my eyes had partial healing so you impaled your restlessness within them taking your fill of my whispered pricking as you strummed my killing song, so softly ____________ daark |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I've always liked your words, how they feel and sound when read out loud. There's such a musical quality to the lilt of them. I'll admit, that I am not the brightest star - and terribly obtuse...so I never really know how to reply. Thought I'd give it a shot with this one. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Nicole..my eyes are always closed when I read the replies...so the brightness is mute..just the texture of your smile is pleasing to my finger glances...thank you ms |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey you! As always there is a treasure within your lines~~ hope this past year has been good to you and this next one even better... M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms MMs, and to you too lady, thanks |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~No better way to die~*~*that's for sure~*~ ~a Blessed 2012 to you, daddy~*~
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
BBBel1e thanks babe...you too. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoying your words Daark. Ms E |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms E, thank you |
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