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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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0 posted 2011-12-13 04:20 PM



when I lay my body down tonight
your face, your words, you . . .
will comfort me as nothing else can
when I lay my body down tonight|
I will drift off to sleep loving you

©December 13, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2011 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2011-12-13 05:31 PM


Tender thoughts, dear Jerry. Nothing like falling asleep with the world being all right, because it is filled with love.

Enjoyed this very much.

Margherita  

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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2 posted 2011-12-13 05:36 PM


Such beautiful thoughts JP, I'm so happy for you.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-12-13 05:41 PM


Margherita, You are so right. When we lay down at night and we are full of love, the world is turning in just the perfect rotation. Thank you for being here.

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Ms E, thank you for being here as always, and your words are appreciate far more than you may realize.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
4 posted 2011-12-13 05:42 PM


(3rd attempt - kicked me out twice!!!)

Only way to go, my friend.  Very tender write.

j.

(okay, fixing to hit submit again ... if you get this it worked, if not...I quit!).

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2011-12-13 06:21 PM


Haha! It worked, jwesley, and thank you very much.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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