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Open Poetry #47

a small note

ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

0 posted 2011-12-07 06:42 PM

you're on my mind all the while
you're in many ways the reason why i smile
and every time you speak
or simply hold my hand
it starts to feel like February season
all over again
you're always the one think of
in the last minutes before sleep

yolilitzli

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-12-08 08:42 AM

How good it feels to have someone who makes us smile!

This is very lovely.

Margherita

ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

2 posted 2011-12-08 09:53 PM

thank you though i usually write darker poetry haha

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

3 posted 2011-12-13 03:20 PM

There are people that cross my mind often ... no matter how hard I try to stop them....makes me wonder why certain people just stay with us while others fade from our memories....huh.........

~~~kingsangel~~~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2011-12-13 06:07 PM

That feeling, of thinking about that special person during the day,makes me smile.
Enjoyed your poem,
Ms. E

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