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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2011-09-28 01:47 AM

at distance, always
so I can not hear her cry
the plea for a touch

and I, silent listener
reach out across the cold night

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2011-09-28 02:01 AM

This is beyond exquisite - in poetry and in the person you are, Krawdad.

Owl

shelerellaSP
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since 2011-08-12

Posts 42

2 posted 2011-09-28 02:17 AM

"beyond exquisite" I think is the right description!

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

3 posted 2011-09-28 06:45 AM

Oh...this is very lovely.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2011-09-28 09:16 AM

This is so you, my friend.
It is good to read you again.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2011-09-28 07:58 PM

Excellent, excellent!
Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2011-09-30 01:22 AM

This makes me stop. Just stop. I like it that much.

Alison

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

7 posted 2011-09-30 07:16 AM

Krawdad my friend, you just nailed what this place and so much of life is all about.

Wonderfully put.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2011-09-30 07:22 AM

Ah, you were beautifully inspired indeed, dear Krawdad. To reach out is the number one gesture of love.

Love,
M

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2011-09-30 01:51 PM

Loving your poetry, Krawdad. I should be so inspired.
Ida

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

10 posted 2011-10-01 12:27 PM

We all need the touch, both ways, no?
Thanks for your kind comments.

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

11 posted 2011-12-13 01:50 PM

Yes, I love this...
g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

12 posted 2011-12-13 06:04 PM

"the plea for a touch..."
Really liked your poem "Silent Listener",
Ms. E

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