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Gunslinger - Town of Bad
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Gunslinger - Town of Bad |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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buzzards hover over Bad's decay snow began to fall, maybe to blot town of Bad, outlaw refuge; scum Gunslinger stood 'neath Judas Tree air cold as sin, breath spewing hate took a deep gulp of air, inhaled sulfur one eye zeroed in on the town's overkill death oozed from the place called Bad Gunslinger walked street, hand on .45 street muddy, empty; Bad's character piano tinkled in a bar called Coven stepped into sawdust soaking up red TinHorn facedown blood-drain death redhead winked, heat was exchanged said, Love ran off with TinHorn's killer, Elijah rolled her eyes upstairs, temptation cast ©December 3, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Just_little_Old_Me Junior Member
since 2011-11-24
Posts 40Roermond, The Netherlands |
Brings you back to the wild west vividly, your poem exhumes the dreary gloom and melodic drama! nicely done  Like Night needs Day |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate the read, Just_little_Old_Me, and your comments. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This is really getting good, Ill pop some pop corn and wait for the next episode. I can't wait to see where this goes. Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hi Lori, and thanks. I'm happy with the way it is going too. Hope I can keep the right frame of mind about it. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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