Open Poetry #47 |
Dawn's Light |
Just_little_Old_Me Junior Member
since 2011-11-24
Posts 40Roermond, The Netherlands |
Shimmering colours vividly The Alchemist paints Bringer of the dawn's light Risen on wings of fiery hope A kaleidoscope Of red, gold and pink Surreal the scene To mere mortal eyes Picture perfect are the skies When the pale moon Is cast away For the morning sun to rise... Like Night needs Day |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice wordplay. Nice grouping, and visually exciting. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Jean-Phillippe...Really enjoyed reading. Take care and let your poetry flow like the rivers of the world...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
It is hard to capture the enthrall of watching the dawn, that first light, but you have done so here beautifully. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Your flow of words compliment the theme very nicely..and I do like the theme.. enjoyed Come read to me some poem, |
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