Open Poetry #47 |
Crazy Love |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Crazy Love Its one thing to feel lonely when you are all alone, its another to feel lonely when you are with someone and even though you are with them, you still think of the one you miss, the one you truly want to be with. And someday perhaps you will, but for now that someday seems a long ways away... I miss you Suzie Kim. JamesLee 25November 2011 I wrote this after watching the movie "Like Crazy". [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (11-27-2011 11:36 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I hear you taking, it is not fair to the one you are with, but . . . But it is what it is . . . ~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks Jerry, I wrote this after watching "Like Crazy". |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I still think of the one I miss too James... great writing :-) Bisous RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ha! Don't feel bad, my friend. I still miss all my 'loves', from my first at 4 years old, till now. One remembers the emotion - especially when one leaves while still in love, and loss is a rip of our very fabric, just as in death . . . and those fragments of another 'time' help mold who we are. One doesn't have to miss or love the past any less than the present, but one does have to remember one's responsibility to living in the present, and for those whom love one today. One has to live for today - not yesterday; yesterday has to be the foundation upon which we plant our feet - a guide to Better our lives. Good write, j. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice writing James. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
upon refection, all 'love' seems rather crazy, methinks?! nice 'write' ! |
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Just_little_Old_Me Junior Member
since 2011-11-24
Posts 40Roermond, The Netherlands |
No one controls what the heart wants, even if it might seem unfair! loved it! Like Night needs Day |
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