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Sunshine

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0 posted 2011-11-17 08:57 AM

Country's Scape

Wee dawn hour’s chill held
Dun colored fields were so graced
With crystalline lace

Jack displayed his gifts of frost
Deer parade against the shine

(c) KRJ
11-17-11
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-11-17 09:04 AM

Beautifully rendered, Sunshine. It even felt pumpkin weather here this morning on my walk with Zoe. The air was clear and clean smelling and a stiff breeze. We may get some frost on the pumpkin before Thanksgiving after all. It's been in the mid-eighties here for weeks.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

JL
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since 2004-04-01

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Texas, USA

2 posted 2011-11-17 10:16 AM

Karilea, you do this so well, painting a picture perfect view through your poetry.
Brings a smile and such a good feeling.
Excellent write.

JL

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Maranatha!

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

3 posted 2011-11-17 12:47 PM

How beautiful!!! You took my breath away with this one!!!

Michael

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California

4 posted 2011-11-19 05:30 PM

I miss living in Tehachapi, where jack visited quite often, and the deer were not too shy to come right up to your house. Thanks for the rekindling of memory, K.

Michael

Alison

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5 posted 2011-11-22 01:03 AM

Loving this.

A

Larry C

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United States

6 posted 2011-11-30 10:25 PM

Karilea, thank you for that picture. I haven't seen it in such a long time. Lovely.

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I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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7 posted 2011-12-01 01:17 PM

I love the images in this. You do word landscapes so well.
Keth

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Martie

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California

8 posted 2011-12-01 01:21 PM

Hi Sissie...Jack sure does know how to paint pretty...as do you. Good thing you're such a warm person. Hugs!

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23

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Florida

9 posted 2011-12-01 04:13 PM

Living in Florida, something like this is a rare treat indeed... thank you for that, I miss those mornings.

secondhanddreampoet
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10 posted 2011-12-02 11:00 PM

fine impressionistic imagery!

passing shadows
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11 posted 2011-12-03 01:56 PM

I saw exactly this yesterday morning here!
But then my dog chased after the deer.

EmmaRose
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Midwest

12 posted 2011-12-03 02:02 PM

love the simplcity and the synchonicity of
all living things

jwesley
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Spring, Texas

13 posted 2011-12-03 03:14 PM

Wonderful, as always, my friend. Especially liked the phrase ..."With crystalline lace".

j.

Just_little_Old_Me
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since 2011-11-24

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Roermond, The Netherlands

14 posted 2011-12-04 06:08 AM

Enchanting vision of a winter wonderland...

enough said!

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Good needs Evil
I need you to be complete...

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Pennsylvania

15 posted 2011-12-04 11:16 AM

I love to read and write Tanka..
I love this seasonal Tanka

The first three lines make a great Haiku.

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