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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Uploaded with [URL=http://imageshack.us]ImageShack.us[/URL he sat on the edge of desperation one ink-black eye scanning floozy a black patch over socket dead his gouged-out other eye scanned too floozy was holding a gaudy dress slipped it over the top of wildhair it settled on her scrawny Gunslinger slipped on his scuffs floozy was necessary, part of his bleak as in bleak outlook for TinHorn and Love how'ja lose that eye, floozy demanded gritted his teeth, "where'd they go?" floozy's yuk-yuking was laughing mean when he crossed the room to clutch her words ringing in his ear Gunslinger started walking toward a town called Bad ©December 1, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (12-01-2011 08:20 PM).] |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
YeeHaa! I hope you continue the story when you get to "Bad Town." JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I think I will, JL, thanks for giving Gunslinger a try, I appreciate it . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Hot dang man! Can't wait to hear the rest, this is gonna be good! You are just full of surprises Jerry!Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate it, Lori. I've had Gunslinger in my thoughts for weeks, finally gave him a try. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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