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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-11-30 07:22 AM

found a way to
shed my skin
into a better blend
making who I was
who now I am
my thoughts play
Stevie Ray in my head
lotta base playing bad
stirs my new bones
to old harmony in
double-laid-back time
I stir within the new
skin I have adopted
I am
prince of the city
rawhide tough
gritty profile
seven o'clock silhouette
I am the lure to young girls
and their mammas too
offering them craving
for their unfulfilled days
nights we'll speak of later
my deep rumbling restraint
adds to the vagueness
where you thought you knew
what I had currently to award
she who would be worthy
of the prince of the city
she will reign as . . .
. . . drum roll, please . . .
my Princess

©November 29, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (11-30-2011 09:59 AM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-11-30 08:35 AM

Cool write Jerry! Love your ending! You are doing all kinds of different things with your writing and it is great!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-11-30 08:40 AM

Yeah, Lori, trying to expand, hopefully it is working, these poems where I play around with words . Thanks for your support. .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (11-30-2011 09:46 AM).]

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2011-11-30 10:59 AM

"my thoughts play
Stevie Ray in my head
lotta base playing bad
stirs my new bones
to old harmony in
double-laid-back time"

Great write Jerry!
Loved this line, had me smiling along with the heavy base.

Enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-11-30 11:17 AM

Thank you, JL, for smiling at the words and the bass.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2011-12-02 06:10 AM

This is quite captivating, dear Jerry! Your new skin is appealing I would say.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-12-02 07:39 AM

Aw, thank you, Margherita Margherita, like an old snake we new to change our skin ever so often.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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