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Hindsight Madness |
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Just_little_Old_Me Junior Member
since 2011-11-24
Posts 40Roermond, The Netherlands |
On jagged teeth of life Shattered thoughts of madness decent No question to reveal For answers are all but void Chilling words of passion Echoing on and on Strangling conformity In a world you don't fit in This realisation is maddening Yet no path will be clear As this rusty knife of sadness Keeps piercing deeper With every tear... [This message has been edited by Just_little_Old_Me (11-25-2011 11:57 AM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You paint your pain in vivid colors. Good stuff!  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I like your style. I like your insight. I like your wordplay. ~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The last 3 lines went straight into my heart... I haven't been around much in the last few weeks, but welcome to Passions!! |
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