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JL
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0 posted 2011-12-01 09:26 PM


I am Confused…. NO?

Sono nell'amore.
(I am in love)

Il mio amore non è.
(My love is not)

Io sono vera.
(I am true)

Il mio amore non è.
(My love is not)

Io sono sbiadite.
(I am faded)

Il mio amore non è.
(My love is not)

Noi non siamo.
(We are not)
    

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-12-01 09:34 PM


Hahaha! Such a tragic poem really shouldn't be laughed at, except when it was damn funny, as is this, JL. Fantastic!

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
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2 posted 2011-12-01 09:37 PM


Thanks Jerry.

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
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3 posted 2011-12-02 05:54 AM


JL, what a surprise to find you writing in Italian! Unrequited love seems to be the sad truth here. But what a lovely way to state it!

I enjoyed this very much!

E' bello essere innamorati ... whatever!

Margherita

JL
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4 posted 2011-12-02 07:49 AM


Margherita, grazie. Essere stupidi in italiano può essere più divertente che in inglese.

Sì, no?  Heeeheee...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
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5 posted 2011-12-02 09:04 AM


Non c'è nulla di stupido nella tua poesia, invece è molto profonda davvero!

We usually love the sound of words expressed in another language more than when they are expressed in our mother tongue. Some kind of exotic fascination!

Margherita

JL
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6 posted 2011-12-02 09:11 AM


Deep?  Haaahaaa...  No depth to being silly.
But I do thank you for your sweet reply!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Pilgrimage
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7 posted 2011-12-02 10:43 AM


I loved it.  I love the sound of Italian anyway, and this was very nicely expressed.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2011-12-02 10:49 AM


there you go messin' with my mushy again JL!
The heart isn't stupid, just helpless.


Lori

JL
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9 posted 2011-12-02 11:10 AM


Thanks Pilgrimage, and howdy!
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Thanks Lori, mushy girl...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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10 posted 2011-12-04 03:31 PM


My dear friend... love is always confusing... YES! *S*
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