Open Poetry #47 |
I am Confused…. NO? |
JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I am Confused…. NO? Sono nell'amore. (I am in love) Il mio amore non è. (My love is not) Io sono vera. (I am true) Il mio amore non è. (My love is not) Io sono sbiadite. (I am faded) Il mio amore non è. (My love is not) Noi non siamo. (We are not) Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hahaha! Such a tragic poem really shouldn't be laughed at, except when it was damn funny, as is this, JL. Fantastic! ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thanks Jerry. Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
JL, what a surprise to find you writing in Italian! Unrequited love seems to be the sad truth here. But what a lovely way to state it! I enjoyed this very much! E' bello essere innamorati ... whatever! Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Margherita, grazie. Essere stupidi in italiano può essere più divertente che in inglese. Sì, no? Heeeheee... JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Non c'è nulla di stupido nella tua poesia, invece è molto profonda davvero! We usually love the sound of words expressed in another language more than when they are expressed in our mother tongue. Some kind of exotic fascination! Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Deep? Haaahaaa... No depth to being silly. But I do thank you for your sweet reply! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I loved it. I love the sound of Italian anyway, and this was very nicely expressed. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
there you go messin' with my mushy again JL! The heart isn't stupid, just helpless. Lori |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thanks Pilgrimage, and howdy! ------- Thanks Lori, mushy girl... JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My dear friend... love is always confusing... YES! *S* |
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