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2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2011-11-19 09:53 AM

As long as to go to hell
take my tough hand,
take your sweet glances,
take the cornerstone
and my freedom of emerald,
take my grey sky
and my magic oceans,
take back streets,
I will take shortcuts,
one-way streets,
as long as to go to hell
let us swagger
and let us correct the future,
let us take the tangent
and the long way round,
the books without anger,
let us roll good time
and the short-lived fields,
as long as to go to hell
let us go there slowly
take my hand softly
that we go there together.

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

1 posted 2011-11-19 03:28 PM

Wow, powerful write, yan. I enjoyed

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-11-19 05:47 PM

let us go there slowly
take my hand softly
that we go there together.

We can cope with everything if we walk the path together, so true, dear Yann.

The challenges of life can be "hellish". "Yes, but" ... instead of going to hell, I hope we are all able to go through/past hell ... towards the light.

Powerful and poetically stunning.

Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2011-11-20 12:08 PM

Bonjour Yann.. I love this!! love your writing!

Bisous
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2011-11-20 12:32 PM

thans martiniat for the supportive comment,

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2011-11-20 12:34 PM

yes margherita,, these are good words to share, kind comment to read, thanks a lot for reading and commenting

yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2011-11-20 12:34 PM

thanks roniece

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2011-11-20 02:17 AM

Hi yann, Love it. My sentiments exactly.
Ida

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2011-11-20 01:56 PM

Hello, Yann da Mann!

I would like to echo Margherita's reply! She always states what I am thinking ~ but she expresses it better than I!

Linda

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