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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Play a slow tune On the violin Let the tin whistle Join in soft lament In a new dream My first love And long dead father Both beckon in the night And I am A young man Once again Speaking thinking In an idiom As hardly knows regret Who feels them go To from where they came Without my as yet following That lambent Traceless shadow land Not found on any map . |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
this is divine, thanks for sharing this well penned piece  Love is the life of the soul... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"And I am A young man Once again Speaking thinking In an idiom As hardly knows regret" This has got to be one of your best. Love this verse. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all My best come to me asking only to be written down Thanks again John . |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is truly one of your very best, John. Ida |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Your poetry speaks well each and every line. Simply enjoyed. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Melancholic beauty. Very enjoyable, with the only difference that I would make within my heart's perception ... the shadow land would be the land flooded with light. But the mystery makes it indeed "waiting in the shadows" ... Margherita |
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