Open Poetry #47 |
saturation of dawn |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you were mechanical in your machinery sounds purring of panting with woman oil lubrication and your saliva was a lovely spit concoction how it settled on my smile sided rigidity I gave you coveting suggestions with vulgarity you said moan songs were liquid in your belly and you needed them kneaded into tides that would stain your most proper modesty I watched you grind the mountains there between the length of your thighs at brim and then you took the dirt of them within and used it like gravy to polish your womb you were undulations of concussions after that quivering of verges before convulsions when one cannot stop the growling of ache that is fever on fingers reaching into heaven and only sighs are the appropriate worship _____________ daark |
||
© Copyright 2011 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved | |||
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
So good. |
||
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Ali-san, thank you little one.. |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I watched an incredible dawn this morning... and sighed then, too. *S* |
||
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ahh you are still able to make me sigh Mr Daark! Very much enjoyed Bisous RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
||
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern...they (the dawns) do seem to be outdoing themselves of late ...thanks lady _______________ ms r&b, and it is a lovely sound, that sighing of yours, thank you ms |
||
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What I love best in this poetic offering of yours is the title and the conclusive line. Saturation of dawn... wow ... the nurturing color-brushes must have been quite explosive .... and what could be a better reaction in the end, than a deep sigh? Love, Margherita |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |