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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-11-09 08:41 AM




you were mechanical in your machinery sounds
purring of panting with woman oil lubrication
and your saliva was a lovely spit concoction
how it settled on my smile sided rigidity

I gave you coveting suggestions with vulgarity
you said moan songs were liquid in your belly
and you needed them kneaded into tides
that would stain your most proper modesty

I watched you grind the mountains there
between the length of your thighs at brim
and then you took the dirt of them within
and used it like gravy to polish your womb

you were undulations of concussions after
that quivering of verges before convulsions
when one cannot stop the growling of ache
that is fever on fingers reaching into heaven

and only sighs are the appropriate worship

_____________

daark

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1 posted 2011-11-09 10:41 AM


So good.
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-11-09 11:54 AM


ms Ali-san, thank you little one..
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3 posted 2011-11-09 03:12 PM


I watched an incredible dawn this morning... and sighed then, too. *S*
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2011-11-10 06:05 AM


ahh you are still able to make me sigh Mr Daark!
Very much enjoyed

Bisous
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2011-11-10 06:36 AM


ms suthern...they (the dawns) do seem to be outdoing themselves of late ...thanks lady


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ms r&b, and it is a lovely sound, that sighing of yours, thank you ms

Margherita
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6 posted 2011-11-20 06:44 AM


What I love best in this poetic offering of yours is the title and the conclusive line.

Saturation of dawn... wow ... the nurturing color-brushes must have been quite explosive ....

and what could be a better reaction in the end, than a deep sigh?

Love,
Margherita

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