Open Poetry #47 |
Dear Mom... |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I wrote these words after my Mom visited me in a dream on the eve of her passing... Dear Mom, Another anniversay of your passing another day when my thoughts have been of you You were in my dreams last night looking beautiful as ever You hugged me warmly and told me all would be well The warmth of your hug has been with me all day I will carry that with me until you visit again love Roniece © 2011 Roniece.com Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thinking of you on this sad day. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
merci beaucoup Jerr... appreciate you! Bisous RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Facing my own anniversaries, I know how precious such visits are... Beautiful write! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So very beautiful, dear Roniece, and I so deeply relate. I adore it when my own Mom visits in dreams. She was and still is the one who comforts me and sustains me. Hugs. Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Those silent hugs are very tangible, aren't they? I wish you more. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
So sad and yet poignantly beautiful, Roniece. Ida |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
You are blessed to think of your dear Mom in such high regard, when many don't appreciate enough who they have in their lives. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Now this is precious! Enjoyed. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Mine's still here - and healthy, considering. At 86 she still says she can whip my uh-huh - I do not argue the point, don't want to embarrass myself. I do somewhat plan for the day I know is coming though, and the missing that's going to rock my universe. Advanced readings of pieces like yours, I think, will help me bridge that gap, spiritually. I thank you for that. j. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
this is so precious, thanks for sharing Love is the life of the soul... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
this is so beautifully written, I read it over & over - thanks for sharing. Love is the life of the soul... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This brought tears to my eyes, Roniece. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a fine 'write' indeed! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello roniece, keep her in memories and grace of your thoughts and words, such a beautiful poem is part of her, yann |
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