Open Poetry #47 |
No Where Near |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
No Where Near Sometimes I want to hold you baby, sometimes I want to kiss you dear, sometimes I want to see you darling but you're nowhere near. JamesLee 15December 2011 |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Very poignant, dear James. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sigh, the fate of distant lovers! May you be nonetheless in a state of grateful serenity, dear James, while waiting for her to be near again. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
That also causes a deep ache within the chest. Good poem. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
oh dear I think you need a ~hug~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
A poignant ache indeed, that stretches across miles. It's hard to miss someone, sometimes. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"sometimes..." it even happens in marriage, my friend, when they're in the same or next room! But that doesn't change a thing - the heart is still there. enjoyed... j. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Alison, Margherita, Jerry, tracie, Nicole and jwesley for the wonderful responses...James |
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