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EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2011-11-06 11:53 AM

Forgive my intrustion
as you lament your
fresh fallen, already
come down

but you were regal
in burgundy, though none
made their way to
the burgeoning ground

So I offer apology
as I couldn't resist
but to pick from your
plentitude, this
spectacular charm

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (11-07-2011 12:56 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-11-06 12:19 PM

Is that burgundy of the cheap California kind? Heehee

Intrusions are only intruderble if the lament is public, otherwise they are private and nay shall ye gather . . .

I liked this interesting fall piece . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 2011-11-06 06:37 PM

Intriguing write. Love the "forgive me for interrupting your wallowing" aspect.

Well done.

Michael

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2011-11-07 10:16 AM

Maybe it was not at all perceived as intrusion, but as a gift, dear EmmaRose.

Your words are full of charm too.

Margherita

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2011-11-07 05:10 PM

I do so enjoy your fresh perspectives, Emma.

I am a fan.

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2011-11-07 06:44 PM

Excellent...love the poem.
The craft of the world is shown in its details...one leaf among uncountables,
And yet the one is precious and poem worthy.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2011-11-07 07:54 PM

Not only do I share your joy
of picking up leaves,
but I also find feathers
quite inviting...

Thank you, Emma!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2011-11-07 11:53 PM

“I couldn't resist
but to pick from your
plentitude, this
spectacular charm”

Wonderful write.
Enjoyed.
JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2011-11-08 02:52 PM

A charming fall poem! Delightful in its respectfulness for our arboreal friends during their time of waning glory.

Love & Tree Light,
EA

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

9 posted 2011-11-08 07:51 PM

Thank you so much for your sweet words.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

10 posted 2011-11-13 04:39 AM

most delightful read, thanks for sharing.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

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