Open Poetry #47 |
Changes Part Two (November) |
A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
I'm looking around - a year has passed, The moment I seized is forever to last, The secrets of cherished November Still live in the imprints of soft fingertips You left on my key, in your eyes that eclipse The various colors of amber. The waters of changes surround my shore, The eyes of the suburbs see right to the core, Respond to my heart's aspiration. Eternity lingers in love's every breath, And it is my place from November till death, My shelter, my sweet isolation. It's plain and it's simple - I have understood That I will keep writing this story for good And send you mysterious letters. Discover the worlds that my verses create For you to unravel and investigate, Just keep them, and nothing else matters. Part One is available here: http://aprilavalon.ucoz.ru/Website/2011.htm#Changes |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"Just keep them, and nothing else matters." This, to me, is it. This is the whole poem. The whole idea and message. I understand this line and feel it deep within my psyche. Yes! ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"My shelter, my sweet isolation. It's plain and it's simple" These lines do it for me. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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