Open Poetry #47 |
Pillar of Salt |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
PILLAR OF SALT 4 November 2011 The taste of your honeyed whispers lingers lost on my tongue like summer breezes in winter remembering. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The title induces me to think of tears ... but in your words there is the world of love that lingers. Beautiful in its sweet melancholy, dear Owl! Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
You have understood and felt my poem's heart very well with your kindness and compassion, Margherita. Thank you. I like what you thought about the title, although it refers to Lot's wife in the Bible. When she looked back, she turned into a pillar of salt. Owl |
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