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Open Poetry #47

Ancient History Genesis

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-11-05 10:43 AM

If you're brought up rough
to fend for yourself
it makes you tough
in some places
where your soft
might have been
if over protected
then overbearing
kept your defenses down
if no
choked in your throat
and confrontation
was over your dead body
you'd bury your head
along with the dread
and suck up the insanity
and make the best of it
staying closer now
that he's the enemy

LGR(C)11/5/11

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-11-05 11:51 AM

Closeness+Enemy=Anarchy.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2011-11-05 02:48 PM

"If you're brought up rough
to fend for yourself
it makes you tough
in some places"

Enjoyed your write Lori!
Much sense in

Ancient History Genesis.

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-11-05 07:14 PM

Jerry, been contemplating your reply all day. Thank you for the perspective.

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2011-11-05 07:16 PM

Thanks JL always like to hear from you.

Lori

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