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Open Poetry #47

Heartsleeve’s Comforter

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-11-02 02:49 PM

Heartsleeve snuggled up with a comforter
in front of the crackling fire
sipping on a hot one
Much too soon the fire was but coals
and her comforter had gone home

LGR©11/2/11

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2011-11-02 02:54 PM

Nice Lori!
There's always tomorrow.
Yes??

Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-11-02 02:57 PM

oh yes, there is always that.
Thanks JL!

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-11-02 02:59 PM

Perfect! Wonderful.

Perfect!

Did I mention that this was perfect?

They will come back, come back again,
As long as the red earth rolls.
He never wasted a leaf or a tree,
Do you think he would squander souls?

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2011-11-02 03:02 PM

I think so Jerry, but you know some things just bear repeating...Thanks friend!

Lori

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 2011-11-02 05:33 PM

Ouch! I was gonna suggest a legless comforter of some type but too many awkward images flooded my brain with that thought, so how about a silent (hug) returned to you?

Michael

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2011-11-02 05:47 PM

Hmmmm, warm, with a bit of chill in the forecast. Nice!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-11-02 07:12 PM

The hug will work fine Michael, thanks!

____________________________________________

Sunshine the weather was an influence here!

Lori

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2011-11-02 11:11 PM

I loved the warm fuzzies that always lingered when the comforters went home, my friend...
wrote something about that once...will see if I can find it, although I didn't use the word comforter...like that much better.

j.

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