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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2011-10-21 08:51 PM


You took my heart away
he said
Ah but when is the expiry date
she said
I hope it never expires
he said
but everything expires
she said
No, not for me
he said
I can’t give you more
she said
It’s ok, I only need to see your smile
he said
Well I hope my smiles smile you forever
she said

And with that a friendship was forged
And smiles were stored for a rainy day


© 2011 Roniece.com

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2011 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2011-10-21 08:54 PM


Sweet. Direct. To the point. Oh, to the point is direct, huh? Okay. I liked it. How's that?

~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2011-10-21 08:59 PM


Such a treat to read you again.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2011-10-21 09:09 PM


Thank you both so much for your comments.. I wasn't expecting anyone to remember me or read me!  You have smiled my day here.. merci!  

Bisous
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JL
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4 posted 2011-10-22 04:06 PM


"a friendship was forged
And smiles were stored for a rainy day"

Refreshing, sweet, and most of all loving.
Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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5 posted 2011-10-22 08:24 PM


You made me smile.

A

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2011-10-30 10:05 PM


A pleasure to read...James
ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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7 posted 2011-10-30 10:11 PM


It's the friendships that lead into love.
Enjoyed your poem,
ms. e

Margherita
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8 posted 2011-11-01 09:56 AM


Dear Roniece, I love the idea of the storage of the smiles for rainy days. Very nice and luminous.

Margherita

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2011-11-01 10:21 AM


R&B..it is good to see you back again lady!


Marchmadness
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10 posted 2011-11-03 01:18 AM


Glad to see you writing again, Roniece.
                                  Ida
                                  

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