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Heart Smiles... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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You took my heart away he said Ah but when is the expiry date she said I hope it never expires he said but everything expires she said No, not for me he said I can’t give you more she said It’s ok, I only need to see your smile he said Well I hope my smiles smile you forever she said And with that a friendship was forged And smiles were stored for a rainy day © 2011 Roniece.com Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sweet. Direct. To the point. Oh, to the point is direct, huh? Okay. I liked it. How's that? ~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Such a treat to read you again. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you both so much for your comments.. I wasn't expecting anyone to remember me or read me! You have smiled my day here.. merci! Bisous RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"a friendship was forged And smiles were stored for a rainy day" Refreshing, sweet, and most of all loving. Enjoyed. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You made me smile. A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
It's the friendships that lead into love. Enjoyed your poem, ms. e |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Roniece, I love the idea of the storage of the smiles for rainy days. Very nice and luminous. Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
R&B..it is good to see you back again lady! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Glad to see you writing again, Roniece. Ida |
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