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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-11-02 11:20 AM




Like a banana
If you find me a peeling
Don’t peek I am shy


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JL
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1 posted 2011-11-02 12:37 PM


LOL... Nice play on words.
Love this.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-11-02 12:41 PM


Feeling a little silly this morning...must be the bad weather moving in.

Thanks JL!

Lori

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-11-02 12:47 PM


Peek? You darn tootin' I'll peek. Cute poem.

They will come back, come back again,
As long as the red earth rolls.
He never wasted a leaf or a tree,
Do you think he would squander souls?

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-11-02 12:55 PM


So much for being shy... Thanks for the warning Jerry!

Lori

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2011-11-02 12:57 PM


You betcha, Lori.

They will come back, come back again,
As long as the red earth rolls.
He never wasted a leaf or a tree,
Do you think he would squander souls?

Michael
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6 posted 2011-11-02 05:49 PM


lol... very a peeling.

Nice one.


Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2011-11-02 07:10 PM


I had a punny feeling this morning.  
Thanks Michael


Lori

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8 posted 2011-11-02 08:54 PM


I was a bit afraid to open this one...but I'm glad I did
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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9 posted 2011-11-02 09:45 PM



HA! I see your "point" roflao!!! Ahem, thanks for the, um, perspective.

Lori

jwesley
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10 posted 2011-11-02 10:08 PM


I love bananas ... peel a little, taste, peel a little, taste, and when all the peelings done, just toss it and savor the flavor it left...

Cool write, my friend... you're a nut!

j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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11 posted 2011-11-02 10:11 PM


You are not the first to have said that.

Lori

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