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karren29
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since 2011-09-29
Posts 85
philippines

0 posted 2011-11-01 06:00 PM



You had another shot of whiskey tonight
Are we gonna start another fight?
Why do you do what you do?
When you said you love me too

Got another message on your phone
It said “are you home alone?”
Why do you do what you do?
When you said you love me too

People say I’m crazy, people say I’m blind
But they can say anything boy I won’t mind
People tell me to leave you, find another man
But I will never do it even if I can

So now I stay up, its 2 am
Standing by the window, watching the rain
Wondering where you have been
Don’t know how long I’ll be waitin

It’s our anniversary today
I got a present for you babe
Be sure to be home before dinner
I want us to be together

But you said there are things you have to do
I wonder, is it more important than me and you?
But as always I said it was okay
So here I am crying on our special day.

I’m still hoping one day you’ll love me
The way I want you to
I pray that someday you will see
How much I love you

People say I’m crazy, people say I’m blind
But they can say anything boy I won’t mind



" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

[This message has been edited by karren29 (11-01-2011 09:17 PM).]

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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2011-11-01 07:44 PM


Well if faithful had a definition besides Webster's, it would be this verse:

"So now I stay up, its 2 am
Standing by the window, watching the rain
Wondering where you have been
Don’t know how long I’ll be waitin"

Nice write, Karren.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

karren29
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since 2011-09-29
Posts 85
philippines
2 posted 2011-11-01 09:09 PM


thank you JL

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

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