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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-11-01 06:56 AM

If it were possible
That I could cup my hands
And gather in them moonbeams
They would be yours for the asking
So in the darkest of your hours
You would never be alone

If I could whisper
A phrase
A perfect sentence
To you
It would be
Your smile lights the world

©October 31, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write the other way. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-11-01 07:05 AM

Just beautiful, dear Jerry!

A real little gem and if you read these words born in your heart to her, she will not only smile but beam, in reflection of your own beauty.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-11-01 07:23 AM

Hi again, Margherita, and thank you kindly for your words for the poem. Sometimes the words just fall from your thoughts in an precise way where you can make a person truly understand how you feel.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write the other way. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-11-01 08:15 AM

this sweet romantic side of you is captivating...I'm sure you are putting that smile on her face. You lucky dog!

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-11-01 08:27 AM

Good morning Lori, and thank you for your kind words. I hope she's smiling, it is a wonderful thing to see.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write the other way. ~*~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2011-11-01 02:43 PM

How incredibly lovely!!! This tender delight is going into my library!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-11-01 03:46 PM

Aw, thank you suthern, you know how to make a guy feel really good.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write the other way. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2011-11-01 07:53 PM

This is a great poem Jerry! Hope to see more like this one, from you.

Enjoyed

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2011-11-01 08:13 PM

Thanks for the nice-nice, JL, I will try to work more of this type of poetry in here.

They will come back, come back again,
As long as the red earth rolls.
He never wasted a leaf or a tree,
Do you think he would squander souls?

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