Open Poetry #47 |
Free Fall |
ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Free Fall ,(Inspired by JerryPat2- Heart Laid Bare) I free fall without a parachute grasping at words that would lift me up My arms, legs spread wide struggling desperately to slow my decline It isn't the fall that hurts they say, it's the sudden stop E. M. L. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you immensely, my gifted friend, for using my poem as a springboard for this little gem. Yes indeed, and you betcha, it's always that sudden stop that's the main problem. Thanks again ~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon, |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you JP, still learning about love, ms. e |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you for taking the time to read, James, ms. e |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Those stops are attention grabbers, for sure. *G* Enjoyed this!! |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
My attention has been grabbed, Thank you Suthern, ms. e |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Good one, Edna. I really like this one. Ida |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Visualization, great visual... Love is 100% give, and never take. But if given, receive with gratitude and a humble heart. Enjoyed your write. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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