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Open Poetry #47

I So Desirous Thee

jwesley
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0 posted 2011-10-26 06:49 AM

I So Desirous Thee.

I cast down the shadows
concealing mine soul from thine.
I throw away the binds
that hold mine secrets from thee.
I give mine flesh for flesh,
mine heart, mine life,
unhindered and free -

I so desirous thee ~~~

© wesley james beard, jr
oct 26, 2011

[This message has been edited by jwesley (10-27-2011 09:51 AM).]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-10-26 11:15 AM

She smote you, she did!

suthern

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2 posted 2011-10-26 01:30 PM

This would be beautiful even without knowing the inspiration! *S* As it is... a big bravo for the perfect response! *S*

Michael

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3 posted 2011-10-26 06:21 PM

I agree with Sunshine... Thou hast been smitten!

A lovely compliment to hers.

Michael

Alison

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4 posted 2011-10-26 07:06 PM

Such a great partnership with Linda's poem. I love when poems inspire poets to write poetry. Does that make sense? Dunno, but I know what I mean!

A

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2011-10-27 10:26 AM

My word! What an exquisite response to my poem "Naked". It's absolutely beautiful. The fact that my poetry could insight you to respond in such a fine manner is highly complimentary! Thank you, James!

This poetic side looks good on you as well!

Big hug,
Linda

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2011-10-27 10:38 AM

Oops a daisy! ... NOW it's saved!

Linda

ebonygirl
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7 posted 2011-10-27 01:59 PM

Nice poem jwesly, ms, e

Margherita
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8 posted 2011-10-29 06:23 AM

Dear Jimmy, it's a joy to read your beautiful words inspired by Linda's poem.

Love it.

Margherita

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