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Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2011-10-22 09:27 PM

stark, cold branches of
denuded trees silhouette
a wicked blue sky
cold lances my undressed
feet from air fraught
with nuances of mockery
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Alison

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-10-22 09:50 PM

adore denuded
silhouettes under indigo
undressed skies
as the hard lance
mocks who I am

Sorry, Alison, couldn't help myself.

~* If they give you lined paper, write the other way. ~*~

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2011-10-23 12:04 PM

Thanks for reading, JerryPat.

Alison

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

3 posted 2011-10-23 12:28 PM

Ali honey, let me know if you need a personal foot warmer okay..

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2011-10-23 12:59 PM

"undressed feet" bring a poignant loneliness. a fine write Alison.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2011-10-23 03:00 AM

Love your unique style, Alison.
Ida

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2011-10-23 10:09 AM

Your images are so vivid a shiver ran down my back!! It's so good to see you again... you enrich this site greatly with both your poetry and your responses. *S* ((((HUGS))))

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-10-23 11:21 AM

Alison, good to read you again! you have been missed ox
Lori

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2011-10-23 06:59 PM

You are all the best and have made me warmer with each of your comments. Thank you.

xoxoxo
Alison

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

9 posted 2011-10-25 03:16 PM

Ah, I feel like Ichabod Crane in reading this… You have captured all of October’s wickedness here. Everything present serving only to make you dread what may yet be coming.

Well done.

Michael

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