Open Poetry #47 |
With You in Our Meadow |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
WITH YOU IN OUR MEADOW 11 October 2011 Tiny wild flowers, bobbing their colours in the breeze, and their scent mingling with the sweetness of the soft, soft grass around us, and you caressing the inside of my soul which you know better than your own, you, comfortable and warm, your bliss glowing sunlight smiles that melt my sighs, and me, leaning back in your arms, safe and beyond happy, our heart singing with the summer birds. Would that Time could stand still with us forever, in this, our sacred summer place! Owl |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sounds like a beautiful meadow to skip through, or perhaps an enormous flower bed to lay down in. Dreamy poem,lady Owl~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
While your meadow is a summer meadow, my own meadow is getting ready to dress for winter (silent, yet peaceful and nonetheless full of light). It's nice to remember the summer sensations through your blissful words, dear Owl. M |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Blues. Smiles. Thank you, Margherita. I am glad I could bring you those summer memories, whilst you are simultaneously enjoying the winter ones. Smiles. Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a portrait of peace you've penned! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Wise One, I thoroughly enjoyed this reading experience ~ 3 times over!!! Brings back a few wonderful memories of my own! Thanks! I needed that! lol Love you bunches! Linda xo |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
O yes, if only it could stand with us just a bit longer. Your sweet poem brings its longevity to the surface. |
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Dawn Brink Junior Member
since 2011-04-28
Posts 44South Africa |
So beautiful! Well done! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Ruth. Smiles and hugs to you and meeow-cuddles to Kate and Colin. Thank you, Linda. I am so happy it was just what you needed and that it brought back wonderful memories. Smiles. Love you bunches too. Thank you, Emma. Yes . . . if wishes were horses . . .! Thank you, Dawn, my South African compatriot. Good to see you back! Owl |
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