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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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Midwest

0 posted 2011-10-14 01:14 PM


Your leaves, now wet
they wrap my feet in
brown bag rainbows, as
Autumn lifts between the
dying Summer breeze

as all suggests
though claimless expectations

there is no reason
yet the season
delivers me its dream

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (10-14-2011 01:58 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-10-14 02:16 PM


Ah, EmmaRose, you have trampled my fall leaves just as you said you would. I'm watching you through the window, and it seems you are deliriously happy.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
2 posted 2011-10-14 02:28 PM


The coming of fall brings smiles, as your enjoyable poem.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Richy
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3 posted 2011-10-14 02:43 PM



Emma dear friend.. your poems are soo easy to fall for..

and so are you


ice
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since 2003-05-17
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Pennsylvania
4 posted 2011-10-14 03:25 PM


Very good poetry-much enjoyed
Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
5 posted 2011-10-14 06:18 PM


You deliver some excellent thoughts here ... Brown bag rainbows ... I like that
😊
Enjoyed
Rex

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
6 posted 2011-10-15 06:50 AM


there is no reason
yet the season
delivers me its dream


Delightful, dear Emma! Inspiring too!

M

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