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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2011-10-09 10:35 PM


JWild Thing

Wild thing what makes
you so wild,
is it your juicy lips
is it your sexy smile.
We spent the summer together
and it was loads of fun,
now that summer has ended
it seems the fun is done.
Now I miss your sexy walk,
your tantalizing smile,
the softness of your skin
the essence of your style.
Wild thing you made
my heart sing until we
had to say goodbye,
now with nothing left
but missing you,
alone tonite
I cry.

JamesLee
09October
2011

  



[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (10-10-2011 07:42 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-10-09 10:41 PM


Yep, you had me humming the tune as I read this. These wild things are both our salvation and our despair, JamesMichael.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

Margherita
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2 posted 2011-10-10 03:51 AM


Wild thing you made
my heart sing


Aren't you just a lucky man, dear James! Even if it was just a gift of Summer, it was precious for your wellbeing.

Lovely.

M

Michael
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3 posted 2011-10-10 07:43 PM


Lovely writing, James.  Nothing good ever seems to last, does it?  Even so, you convey your missing of her beautifully.

Enjoyed the read.


Michael


jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
4 posted 2011-10-10 07:45 PM


"...alone tonight I cry"

Ah ... enjoyed...

j.

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2011-10-12 02:19 PM


"Wild thing what makes
you so wild"

I bet she would say: "James Michael does!"
LOL.

Great write JamesLee...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2011-10-16 12:43 PM


Thank you Jerry, Margherita, Michael, jwesley and JL for the wonderful responses...James
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